What are the positive and negative aspects of the connection to outside world including mobile phone, email and social networking?
It is irrefutable to say that with the advent inventions and technical advancement world has become narrower and more accessible to ubiquitous people. Question is about the pros and demerit of connecting nations, and being in technological era I am more inclined toward the power it posses over common people. Both the aspect about both technological connections will be discussed in this essay and will deduce to a conclusion with its positive features.
To begin with, this era has seen upheaval in the communicative medium whether it is mobile phones or social networking. Moreover, we are all surrounded by gadgets that connect us to the world. Mobile phones which have now reached people of all class and gender around the globe, for instance, was available to only business class. So, instant update in news, live connection to the world, easier in conducting global businesses is possible by this technical advancement.
On the contrary, people on the other side of the fence assert that many teenagers are wasting their valuable time on social media and mobile phones as it is the time to be engaged in education. Not only time constraint, but this has gravitate teenagers toward dark world of cybercrime, dangerous games, easy accessible of drugs, consequently hampering child psychology and leading toward self destruction. To exemplify this, in the year 2016 around 10 teenagers committed suicide because of a suicidal game called "water shark".
To recapitulate, there are immense benefits of contacting with the outside world via different medium; however, the use of it has to be monitored used rationally for utmost benefit.
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| 2018-06-23 | Ajay naher | 80 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, consequently, however, if, moreover, so, as to, for instance, on the contrary, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 10.5418719212 123% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 6.10837438424 33% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 8.36945812808 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 5.94088669951 67% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 20.9802955665 86% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 31.9359605911 138% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.75862068966 122% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1391.0 1207.87684729 115% => OK
No of words: 264.0 242.827586207 109% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26893939394 5.00649968141 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 3.92707691288 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92323885668 2.71678728327 108% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 139.433497537 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632575757576 0.580463131201 109% => OK
syllable_count: 447.3 379.143842365 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.57093596059 108% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.6157635468 65% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.71428571429 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.931034482759 215% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 3.65517241379 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6551724138 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.5024630542 117% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.9919642087 50.4703680194 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.454545455 104.977214359 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.9669160288 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.81818181818 7.25397266985 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 2.75862068966 72% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 2.91625615764 137% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193859185622 0.242375264174 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0679480603534 0.0925447433944 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0381870855601 0.071462118173 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100909058491 0.151781067708 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0458321416313 0.0609392437508 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 12.6369458128 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 53.1260098522 73% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 10.9458128079 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 11.5310837438 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.73 8.32886699507 117% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 55.0591133005 149% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.94827586207 116% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.3980295567 112% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 88.8888888889 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 80.0 Out of 90
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