You hired a car from a rental company and while you were on holiday, you have a small accident. You will have to write to the company to explain it. You need to explain:
• Where you hired it and when?
• Describe how the accident happened?
• What you did after the accident?
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing to inform you regarding an accident that happened last week at City Centre Square. I was driving the car I rented from your City Centre Deira office on the 12th May.
This accident happened on Monday 15th May at 12pm, while I was exiting the shopping mall parking area. A car right behind ran into the back of the car leaving a dent on the bumper. We had immediately called the traffic police from the accident spot. Since it was a minor accident and all papers of the car is up-to-date, there were no issues in getting the claim report from the police. As per the cops, I can take the car along with the documents to the insurance claim department for an evaluation and cost-free repair.
Following the accident, I have carefully driven it to a nearby long-term parking bay. I would prefer not to drive the car and cause any additional damage to the car. I hereby attach all the copies of claim reports for your reference. Please let me know when you can arrange to take back the car and original docs from me.
Sorry for the inconvenience caused. Awaiting your earliest response.
Yours faithfully,
Sandra Brown
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
may, regarding, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 959.0 937.175257732 102% => OK
No of words: 205.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67804878049 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4481001873 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.639024390244 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 293.4 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.6068103566 44.8134815571 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.5 76.5299724578 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6428571429 16.8248392259 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.78571428571 4.34317383033 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 7.41237113402 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 1.49484536082 468% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.173649624869 0.216113520407 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0467615651553 0.0766984524023 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0539120644291 0.0603063233224 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0953674221813 0.12726935374 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0630988182097 0.0580467560999 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 8.37731958763 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.27 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 41.2886597938 109% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 87.0786516854 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.