Write a letter to this company which provides the connection. In your letter
1. describe the problems
2. explain how they are affecting people
3. say what the company should do to help
You don't need to write any address.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to bring to your attention a connection problem with the provided interned service by your company.
Recently, we face two major problems which effect immensely on the connections. Firstly, network signal gets fluctuating regularly in the evening. When many people connect their laptops to the network, signal becomes extremely low. Secondly, we lost completely the connection; however, the connection lump blinks in green, indicating that full connection is available.
Many residents in the building where I live cannot talk over the Skype to their family who live in other countries. I personally do not use the internet in a regular basis, but I utilize the internet from home to monitor the work. These problems have a detrimental impact on my work progress.
I have tried to contact your service department on several occasions to report the problem. I strongly ask that you send your maintenance team to replace the hardware devices in our building and that they reinstall the updated software. It must have been corrupted by any recent virus.
I look forward to the problem being resolved.
Yours faithfully,
Ayoub
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 200, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ardware devices in our building and that they reinstall the updated software. It ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, look, second, secondly, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 996.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 188.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29787234043 4.54256449028 117% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70287850203 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76704152242 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.696808510638 0.622605031667 112% => OK
syllable_count: 299.7 290.88556701 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.8844349077 44.8134815571 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.6153846154 76.5299724578 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.4615384615 16.8248392259 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.30769230769 4.34317383033 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 1.49484536082 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0906914995624 0.216113520407 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0281796592761 0.0766984524023 37% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0326826270799 0.0603063233224 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0474718769108 0.12726935374 37% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0486498897424 0.0580467560999 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 8.37731958763 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 70.7449484536 81% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 7.45979381443 118% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.87 8.71597938144 148% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.95 7.59969072165 118% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 41.2886597938 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.