Some people say we have too many choices these days? Do you agree or disagree?
Most people believe that as a human, they have to make choices in different situations today. It obviously appears that choices are significant parts of living fact and not separable. I will explain why in this essay.
Firstly, people in all levels of life are faced situations in which they have to choose between different ways that may help them achieve their goals. Examples can be seen in choosing an appropriate major in university. If it was a right choice, beginning a successful career would be a long-term consequence of this. Secondly, some of the selections are related to human beings' relationships. This means that people are able to attract others to themselves and vice versa. They can choose whom to surround them such as friends and spouse. Finally, there are some choices depending on what type of lifestyle we have chosen over life. For example, those who are in favour of healthy lifestyle tend to choose regular workouts and vegetarianism. there are, however, proponents of living without limitations on what they eat.
It is true that these days people confront with particular circumstances which make them seek alternatives for obtaining the best result. Despite this, some events occurring worldwide are uncontrollable and out of humans' power such as natural disasters.
To conclude, although the complexities of life force people to face a range of choices in different situations, having a right choice is somewhat difficult these days. This totally depends on individuals' ability to consider all required factors to have a successful choice.
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
...ult these days. This totally depends on individuals ability to consider all required factor...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, for example, such as, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1328.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22834645669 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85639078523 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.629921259843 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 414.9 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.6381678407 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.0 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.875 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0625 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194630875352 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0567142066835 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0617310487887 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123756065837 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0230861999004 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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