celebrities from the entertainment world and sports are becoming role models for youth. youngsters try to copy their lifestyle . what are its positive and negative impacts.
In modern era, everyone is attracted by their role model, especially youngsters. Celebrities from entertainment world and sports are becoming role this leads to good and bad impact model of new generation. They are trying to imitate their lifestyle and other things, and this attractive behavior leads to good and bad impacts on them. I will discuss all essay in forthcoming paragraphs.
There are myriad of positive impacts of following the celebrities by young one in their daily life. The most conspicuous one is that grown up can develops their personality, and change their style to make unique appearance in society like celebrities. For example, they can become successful in life by choosing their career, as like famous personalities. Furthermore, when they create interest in sports and like to watch particular game due to their favorite player, then definitely they can choose that game for their future.
On the other side of coin, there are a plethora of bad impacts on youngsters. When they try to copy their famous personality, then their demands also get increased for new dresses, as well as, their basic amenities surged up to greater extent. This thing become burden for their parents to fulfill needs of their children. Eventually, they are also tried to behave and change society, which is not good for traditional society. Sometime this creates negative influence on their character.
To recapitulate, one can say that every aspect has two sides, but it is depend on individual how to take that thing. The essay that I discussed above also affect the life of person in two ways, so it is good to look at bright side.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, look, so, then, well, for example, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.5418719212 95% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 6.10837438424 82% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 8.36945812808 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 5.94088669951 135% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 20.9802955665 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 31.9359605911 135% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.75862068966 69% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1377.0 1207.87684729 114% => OK
No of words: 274.0 242.827586207 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02554744526 5.00649968141 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 3.92707691288 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72245405602 2.71678728327 100% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 139.433497537 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576642335766 0.580463131201 99% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 379.143842365 114% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 4.6157635468 130% => OK
Article: 2.0 1.56157635468 128% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.71428571429 233% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.931034482759 322% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.65517241379 82% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6551724138 119% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.5024630542 88% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.8996020353 50.4703680194 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.8 104.977214359 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2666666667 20.9669160288 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.86666666667 7.25397266985 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.33497536946 37% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 6.9802955665 129% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 2.75862068966 109% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 2.91625615764 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.272143080123 0.242375264174 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0900260987426 0.0925447433944 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0770845098059 0.071462118173 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.147744147473 0.151781067708 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0935456863486 0.0609392437508 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 12.6369458128 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 53.1260098522 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.54236453202 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.9458128079 94% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 11.5310837438 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.32886699507 103% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 55.0591133005 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.94827586207 85% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.3980295567 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.5123152709 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 65.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 58.5 Out of 90
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