Nowadays most of the urgent problems can only be solved through international coopration. To what extent do you agree or disagree.
In these days we know about the critical issues around the world is that most of them need a global support for struggling with. For watching all problems of the world, I completely agree with this statement. Through my examples and assertions and I shape up my opinion by the end.
We know that globalisation is one of the most critical and vital happening for all countries but I Bolster my viewpoint by claiming that, how to tackle inevitable incidents such as economic crises global warming, greenhouse gases emission regarding this Universal issue, all countries know that these problems impact on our planet and their countries and their individuals are involved appreciate that globalisation removed from the borders and walls between the countries. Therefore, I believe that these problems need an International Coopration.
On the other hand, our world is face many kind of problems which do not belong to one nation or one district. I can put a Point on the religious wars and environmental issues. Firstly, our world is facing to lots of terrorism. Especially, In the Middle East there are many murders or bombing which need worldwide support or assistance. In addition, The people cutting down the trees day by day and built large buildings in all Nations which leads the global warming and increasing greenhouse emissions and I believe that all of them could not solved by the one country planning. As a result, I appreciated that eradicating International problems need an International cooperation.
In conclusion, regarding globalisation and international issues, there is no any alternative option to tackle these world wide problems and eradicate an International cooperation.
- The chart shows the sports played in Australia in 2003.All figures in percentage. 78
- Nowadays technology is increasing being used to monitor what people are saying and doing for example through cellphone tracking and security cameras In many cases the people being monitored are unaware that this is happening 62
- the chart shows the sports played in Australia in 2003.All figures in percentage. 11
- The chart shows the sports played in Australia in 2003. All figures in percentage 11
- Technical advancement have decreased the writing and mathematical skills of the students nowdays.Should the use of calculator and computer be limited or not? 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 39, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun kind seems to be countable; consider using: 'many kinds'.
Suggestion: many kinds
... On the other hand, our world is face many kind of problems which do not belong to one ...
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Line 5, column 381, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'trees'' or 'tree's'?
Suggestion: trees'; tree's
...n addition, The people cutting down the trees day by day and built large buildings in...
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Line 5, column 547, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'solve'
Suggestion: solve
...nd I believe that all of them could not solved by the one country planning. As a resul...
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Line 5, column 649, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... that eradicating International problems need an International cooperation. ...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... need an International cooperation. In conclusion, regarding globalisation a...
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Line 7, column 67, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... globalisation and international issues, there is no any alternative option to ta...
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Line 7, column 78, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...ion and international issues, there is no any alternative option to tackle these ...
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Line 7, column 120, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: worldwide
... any alternative option to tackle these world wide problems and eradicate an International...
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Line 7, column 120, Rule ID: WORLD_WIDE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'worldwide'?
Suggestion: worldwide
... any alternative option to tackle these world wide problems and eradicate an International...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, regarding, so, therefore, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1432.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26470588235 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06112046112 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551470588235 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 112.875915156 49.4020404114 228% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 119.333333333 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6666666667 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.25 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137994172942 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0575636213341 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0461195925497 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.084651184246 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00708325446362 0.056905535591 12% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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