The maps below show an island, before and after the constuction of some tourist facilites.

Essay topics:

The maps below show an island, before and after the constuction of some tourist facilites.

The given maps reveal the information about an island, build the many facilites for tourist before and after in range of 100 metres area.

Firstly, there are 15 accomodations, one reception, one restaurant, one swimming pool, pier, footpaths and vehicle tracks build on the island for tourists without the cutting of trees.

Secondly, the 9 accomodations build in mid of island and 6 accomodation construct the west side near the beach. Futhermore, pier have been built in south side for welcome the tourists and reception have construct in mid for provide the information the tourist. Moreover, restaurant is build in north side. It is provide the food to tourist l. In addition to this, in east side not make any building because there are many trees. One swimming pool make in west side near the beach for bathing the tourist. All facilites are provided in 100 metres area.

Overall, it is evident that, accomodation and other facilities for tourist are build and a pire is construct to permit access to the island by boat.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 313, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'provided'.
Suggestion: provided
...estaurant is build in north side. It is provide the food to tourist l. In addition to t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, moreover, second, secondly, so, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 33.7804878049 68% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 864.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 174.0 196.424390244 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96551724138 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.63192868298 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67781557637 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 106.607317073 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551724137931 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 261.9 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.1247391851 43.030603864 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.4 112.824112599 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4 22.9334400587 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.9 5.23603664747 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160090749509 0.215688989381 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0682071357955 0.103423049105 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0771310129751 0.0843802449381 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124261749212 0.15604864568 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0881430577815 0.0819641961636 108% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.2329268293 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 61.2550243902 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.25 11.4140731707 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.29 8.06136585366 90% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 40.7170731707 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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