The government should pay salary to the women who are raising their children without job. Do you agree or fisagree with given statement.
Government of nation to untertake the responsibility of the welfare of it's people. The administration should providr some money to the womens having no jobs and growing their children. Here i would accord for the given statement.
There are manifold points behind this phenomena. First and foremost,they provide good education to their children with this support of gpvernment. By getting excellent education their children can fulfill their desires by becoming prpfessional on their carrer.moreover,increment their living standard womens can able to fulfill their offspring dreams by providing them their all needs and also womens can managing their house by getting there basic needs. Every coin has two aspects.therefore,this approach have darker sude too.
On the flip side,rather than giving salary to the womens without having jobs.government should provide them work which helps in uplifting their living standard and they become able to provide all the neccesories to their children by their own earning money and by seeing their mother doing toil hard their offspring copy the footsteps of their mothers and become hardworker.furthermore,womens having no work and taking salary from the government without doing job they become lethargic and depend on government and cannot become a role model of their juveniles.
To conclude, from all of above it is stated that government should provide the money for every women because house cannot be managed wothout mothers and growing children must be needed their mothers at home.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, therefore
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1307.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 236.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.53813559322 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.42652543526 2.80592935109 122% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555084745763 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 383.4 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 160.258433264 49.4020404114 324% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 145.222222222 106.682146367 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.2222222222 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.88888888889 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.314167450295 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114087389534 0.084324248473 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0861829521465 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.196995893922 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0617958603956 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.8 13.0946893788 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.15 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.41 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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