Some people think that animals should be kept in zoo while other says forest is best place for animals.Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Animals are the subline creation of nature. Presently, masses believe that zoological garden is one of the lucrative space for fauna species while other claims that forests are the better habitat for them.here i woulf account for both the sides with my own prescription.
There are plethora of points to shore up my view. First and foremost,zoo plays a magnificent role in safeguarding the endanger species from extinction as well as from the process of breeding as a result they will get long lasting life. Moreover, zoological gardens providr safety from unfair malpractices such as hunting, poaching and so on. To illustrate selfish humans. Hunt animals for earning their livelihood as a result macimum numbrrs of fauna species are rising by the day only because of zoological members.
Apart from it,yeach an every person want healthy life as like endanger species also be like that to exemplify zoo offers them best medical facilities and look after them time to time abd care for them in order to they will get prosperious life hence, it is to be considered that zoo are the best place for animals.
By contrast, others have conflicting views too,other folks claims that wildlife centuries are the better habitat for them.it provides them natural environment and can enjoy their life without any restriction so that our environment will not face any obstacle because of unmaintained foid chain however, both ecology and animals remain satisfied in order to get balanced environment.
To recapitulate,both thr sides hold their valid grounds but according to my perception forests are the better place to live in for them as a result nobody want to live in a cage and all want happy life so i prefer to wildlife centuries at large extent.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , zoo
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...lays a magnificent role in safeguarding the endanger species from extinction as well as from...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , yeach
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, look, moreover, so, well, while, apart from, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1465.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05172413793 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73104536745 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586206896552 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 114.556929079 49.4020404114 232% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 146.5 106.682146367 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.0 20.7667163134 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.5 7.06120827912 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190264840882 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0642297224604 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0511288529021 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105466714679 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0444996622212 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.0 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.