1: Many people believe that social networking sites ( such as facebook) have had a negative impact on both individuals and society. To what extent do you agree?
There is a widely held view among people that social channels have many detrimental influences on all walks of life. To a certain extent I agree that they do harm to our society, however I also believe that it could be beneficial to our life if we acknowledge the way to utilize online social media.
On the one hand, social networking site causes distraction in everyday activity as well as affecting our health. In this increasingly ever-developing society, especially for technology, people tend to lead a sedentary lifestyle and being glued to the smartphone screen all day. As a result, eye-relating diseases become more and more prevalent, job satisfaction and fulfillment go down and the unemployment rate dramatically rockets over the last decade. For example, over 79% of children aged 10 to 15 have to suffer from myopia and mental illness on account of the computer fatigue syndromes.
On the other hand, social networks facilitate our daily exposure to the orthodox resources of information ranging from economics to politics. Every available international news, breaking news... is able to be discovered with a single click of a button thanks to a wide range of users on the Internet. If the internet surfers learn how to maximize the profits bringing to our life via Social channels, along with opting for their favorite, profitable sites to follow, these precious tools would do wonders for our community. To illustrate, people who are passionate about economic knowledge could subscribe to a number of specific pages or experts on Facebook such as BBC, CNN, the Economists... with no charge at all.
All things considered, although such sites might have some drawbacks to people like distraction or some health problems, human being could take advantage of these phenomenal innovations to support their life in terms of understanding.
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| 2018-06-14 | vannguyetthanh | 89 | view |
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- 1: Many people believe that social networking sites ( such as facebook) have had a negative impact on both individuals and society. To what extent do you agree? 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 504, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'have' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'haves'.
Suggestion: haves
...ple, over 79% of children aged 10 to 15 have to suffer from myopia and mental illnes...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, well, for example, such as, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1562.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20666666667 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96778256167 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.656666666667 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 495.9 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.3976371411 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.153846154 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0769230769 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.53846153846 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204287339218 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.05983530192 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0513948474349 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120416856358 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0523157156539 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.62 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.