Some people think that animals should be kept in the zoo while other people say forest is the best place of animals. Discuss both sides and give opinion.
It is well said that animals are beautiful creature of the nature on the global. Presently, A large number of people say that animals should be kept in the zoo but other individual said forest is the greatest place for animals. here I would account both sides and my own preception.
On the other hand, The zoo is worthwhile to preserve animal from hunters. For example, People like to do hunting and they going to forest. Beside this, Population is increasing day by day. People axing down a large number of tree and it is alarming to deforestation. Furthermore, In zoo ,people can see easily and take photos carefully.
On the other hand, Forest is the natural habitat of animals. Where they can live with their family. Animals should be live with fully freedom and it is useful to their physical growthing. But also It is against the low of nature and animals.
Moreover, I think, Natural habitat is the real home of the animals. and Government should make strict rule for deforestation and preserving by shooter and hunters.
To recapitulate, Both sides are the perfect place to animals and they also maintain our food chain. without animals food chain will be broken.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 93, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: Many; Numerous
...of the nature on the global. Presently, A large number of people say that animals should be kept ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Here
...rest is the greatest place for animals. here I would account both sides and my own p...
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Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...ncreasing day by day. People axing down a large number of tree and it is alarming to deforestatio...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ng to deforestation. Furthermore, In zoo ,people can see easily and take photos ca...
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Line 5, column 62, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Where” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...rest is the natural habitat of animals. Where they can live with their family. Animal...
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Suggestion: And
...abitat is the real home of the animals. and Government should make strict rule for ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Without
... and they also maintain our food chain. without animals food chain will be broken.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, well, while, for example, i think, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 982.0 1615.20841683 61% => OK
No of words: 203.0 315.596192385 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.83743842365 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.585648544 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 176.041082164 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.556650246305 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 307.8 506.74238477 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.6916055113 49.4020404114 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 61.375 106.682146367 58% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.6875 20.7667163134 61% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.875 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.376113065236 0.244688304435 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103544112255 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0948684020829 0.0667982634062 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184556749461 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0958982027966 0.056905535591 169% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 13.0946893788 59% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 50.2224549098 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.9 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.73 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 78.4519038076 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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