Some people pursue career paths that lead to management positions. Other people follow career paths leading to positions of individual responsibility, which do not involve managing others. Which career path are you more likely to follow?
In the modernized and globalized world, there are assortment of companies and organizations, which have both management positions as well as individual responsibility positions. I personally prefer to follow the career path of management positions for two main reasons.
The first exquisite point to be mention is that management positions wide up your career scope. In the competitive world, organizations are in the race of gaining large number of customers in order to gain profit. To do so they need good managers, hence the demand of management professionals are of high level. For instance, many private companies like Information technology, e-state, financial organizations and even though public sectors, PPP organisations all need effective and efficient administrative cell to ace the market. One of my friend did a masters in healthcare management. After completion of his course he got ample of job opportunities from very prestigious private as well as government organizations. As a result, he progressed far more earlier than his other friends who did some other technical courses.
Another reason that deserves some words is that you get ample learning opportunities when you enter in this field. There are myriad of skills a person can develop by working as manger. However, there is very limited learning in other type of fields, as they are mainly focused on single, technical things. For example, an IT engineer, during his studies or job only gathers technical knowledge like coding and programming. These things keep their mind in a small box which does not allow them to think broadly.
Above all, many people may prefer to go on the path of individual centered jobs because they think that they can gain mastery in one particular field and do not need others. These kinds of people can never grow personally and professional. Because the situations have changed in the companies. If a person is not ready to work in team, companies simply deny the person to work with them.
In conclusion, I strongly believe that mangement positions are better to follow. this is because they not only proliferates our career scope, but also provides us great knowledge.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 51, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'assortments'?
Suggestion: assortments
...ernized and globalized world, there are assortment of companies and organizations, which h...
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Line 1, column 131, Rule ID: BOTH_AS_WELL_AS[1]
Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
...s, which have both management positions as well as individual responsibility positions. I ...
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Line 3, column 155, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... world, organizations are in the race of gaining large number of customers in ord...
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Line 3, column 556, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a master' or simply 'masters'?
Suggestion: a master; masters
...to ace the market. One of my friend did a masters in healthcare management. After complet...
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Line 3, column 755, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'earlier' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: earlier
...zations. As a result, he progressed far more earlier than his other friends who did some oth...
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Line 5, column 320, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'an' or 'IT'?
Suggestion: an; IT
... single, technical things. For example, an IT engineer, during his studies or job onl...
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Line 5, column 326, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'engineers'?
Suggestion: engineers
...e, technical things. For example, an IT engineer, during his studies or job only gathers...
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Line 5, column 512, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...h does not allow them to think broadly. Above all, many people may prefer to go ...
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Line 7, column 241, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...never grow personally and professional. Because the situations have changed in the comp...
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Line 9, column 82, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: This
...ngement positions are better to follow. this is because they not only proliferates o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, may, so, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 13.8261648746 65% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 43.0788530466 72% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 52.1666666667 88% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.0752688172 149% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1841.0 1977.66487455 93% => OK
No of words: 353.0 407.700716846 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21529745042 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98080272045 2.67179642975 112% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 212.727598566 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609065155807 0.524837075471 116% => OK
syllable_count: 576.9 618.680645161 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.51792114695 142% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.6003584229 97% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.0161858295 48.9658058833 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.05 100.406767564 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.65 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.9 5.45110844103 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 11.8709677419 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.85842293907 52% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252290166776 0.236089414692 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0611074738266 0.076458572812 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0742147906872 0.0737576698707 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139110554105 0.150856017488 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0926764115282 0.0645574589148 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 11.7677419355 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.7 10.9000537634 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.51 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 86.8835125448 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.