The tendency of human beings to copy eacb other is seen in fashion clothes and consumer goods. To what extent do you agree
Human beings being a social animal tend to imitate each other. Some are trendsetters others being trend followers. The latter half of the people form the largest group. I concur with the notion that human beings tend to follow each other and it os evident majorly in the fashion world and consumer products.
These days fashion world play a pivotal role in defining the latest trend of the season. Major brands use famous personalities to endorse their product whixh are later followed by many since the ambassadors have a huge fan folllowing. Influential factors and social stature makes imitating an inevitable act.
Similar notion drives the consumer products industry. People buy products with the experience of genuine buyers by reading through their reviews. A product that has good reviews and features has a larger market capitalization. Peer influence also acts in gaging popularity of the product. Imitating is no longer restricted to products but have their horizon broadened to living and well being of the people. Followkng yhe daily regime of famous personalities including healthy lifestyle, food habits has started influencing the youth.
To conclude, human beings tend to stay in a society which relates popularity to acceptance and social stature to some extent.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1080.0 1615.20841683 67% => OK
No of words: 204.0 315.596192385 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29411764706 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68045383408 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.642156862745 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 334.8 506.74238477 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.6352757686 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.1428571429 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5714285714 20.7667163134 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.64285714286 7.06120827912 23% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151383928311 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0524780006947 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0674997941631 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0966572474566 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0817897919653 0.056905535591 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.81 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.75 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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