Nowadays people living in large cities face many problems in their daily lives. What are these problems? Do you think the government should encourage people to move to smaller towns?
It is rightly said, "Prosperity comes with bestowed issues." Since years urbanisation and industrialisation has helped in overall development in metropolitan cities but it has also attracted many problems with it. I concur with the notion that Government should divert its focus towards smaller towns by providing inhouse facilities to control the migration in business cities.
With industrial development, skilled labourforce from small towns and developing countries have moved in to seek employment opportunities which in turn has soared prices of daily necessities due to an imbalanced demand and supply of goods and services. To exemplify inflated housing cost had mandated people to move to smaller spaces. Congestion and degarded quality of life have caused a resultant low life expectancy ratio in cities. Due to large population such areas a prone to terrorist attacks compared to smaller regions as the resultant damage would be huge.
To succumb to the stated crisis Government can promote living in smaller towns. This will also enable economic empowerment of the people and the city as a whole. Facilitating disinvestment and decentralisation from larger towns to small cities along with subsidies being offered to industries in such areas can foster employment opportunities. It would also help in reducing disparity between cities.
To conclude for a sustainable and progressive living small cities should also be enabled by regulating immigrants and working towards industrial growth. The above self progressive vicious circle can also help people from large cities live a contented life
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1373.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 245.0 315.596192385 78% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.60408163265 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95632099841 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13616037125 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.624489795918 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 431.1 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.2569733355 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.416666667 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4166666667 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.41666666667 7.06120827912 20% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215636151646 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0749000315383 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.044914038876 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123592554871 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0107487744662 0.056905535591 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.2 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.3 8.58950901804 120% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 9.78957915832 163% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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