Levels of youth crime are increasing rapidly in most cities around the world. What are the reasons for this, and suggest some solutions
Nowadays juvenile delinquency has risen quickly in most cities all over the world. This essay will analyze the major causes of this problem and suggest some measures to be taken to reduce it.
First of all, neglectful parents are widely considered as a primary reason for this trend. They have tended to spend most of their time on working to earn money instead of nurturing their children while teenagers are not mature enough and very sensitive. If no one keeps eyes on teenagers, they may make friends with bad people and follow delinquent behavior. For example, criminals can ask a child to play truant and hang out with them while parents think that their child is studying at school. In addition, the rapid development of internet makes it easier for children to access harmful information every day. They can watch violent or sexual images from websites or even on television. This may cause them to get involve in delinquent behavior.
This problem could be tackled effectively if parents spend more time with their offspring. Father and mother can take turn to take care of their children, talk with them frequently and control strictly who they make friends with. In addition, there should be more social activities for young people to do in the local community, such as frequent talks, music concert, cleaning streets, growing trees, helping the old people…These kinds of outdoor activity not only improve their social skills but also teach them to become good citizens.
In conclusion, although there are various reasons to cause juvenile offending increase dramatically, this problem could be tackled by much more care of both parents and communities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: These
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, so, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1404.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12408759124 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52616970521 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.649635036496 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 420.3 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.8830980763 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.0 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0769230769 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.69230769231 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150816006936 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0564311073639 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.050956788911 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105421578609 0.151304729494 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0647350914709 0.056905535591 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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