The trend of increased consumer goods production is damaging the natural environment.why is it still happening?what are the solution for this situation?
It's is undoubtedly the case that environment effected; in the modern scenario the manufacturing of consumer goods is highly effective on global warming or not? Which is also affecting the society adversely. In this essay, we will discuss the root cause of these problems and methods to mitigate this critical situation.
While there is a cascade of reasons for this unfortunate trend, a few of them are more prominent. First and foremost is the industrialisation were manufactured quite few of products; detergent, skin creams. Due to this reason, factorise destroyed hazardous chemicals in ponds and rivers. According to this case, the water had been polluted nowadays. It is highly effective on marines and die the living soul for polluted water. Secondly, the electrical appliances especially, air conditioner emitting chlorofluoro gas in environment. One of the causes of this could be depleted the ozone layer day-by-day while mean to say that, it has effective on mankind and environment for instance; the Hindustan times was conducted survey and believe that the India city of new Delhi is highly polluted city because, it has production a ton of goods and release harmful gases. According to my perspective that city people were more suffer from cancer, jaundice and hazardous diseases. In tandem, with my solutions government and people were being responsible for destroyed environment so, government make a law and do counseling of people to aware for preventing around us.
Apart from that, the farmer growing quite few of cuisine; vegetables and fruits. It used to harmful pesticides so, they deplete the fertility of soil. Due to that reason, the environment is effecting day-by-day. Last but not least, in the contemporary era, the yougestor affection towards fashion whereas, used to perfume for fragnance but, perfume transform clorofluoro gas in global. There is almost certainly no one solution to this problem given the complexity of its causes however, one option has to be to make general public aware of hazardous effects on earth. It would also be possible the government should banned chemical factories and products.
To crown it all, there are variety of different factors that have led to harmful effect on earth. While it may not be possible to find a complete solution of this, this could probably solved by encourage green revolution and create awareness among to three rs principle; reduce, reuse and recycle to protected the environment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...hly effective on global warming or not? Which is also affecting the society adversely...
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...se problems and methods to mitigate this critical situation. While there is a...
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...lutions government and people were being responsible for destroyed environment so...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, whereas, while, apart from, as to, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2085.0 1615.20841683 129% => OK
No of words: 396.0 315.596192385 125% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26515151515 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46091344257 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89813959127 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 228.0 176.041082164 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.575757575758 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 658.8 506.74238477 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 67.8015302187 49.4020404114 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.25 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.25 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15772193874 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0397631314128 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.039125901557 0.0667982634062 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0923112661203 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0351657573349 0.056905535591 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 118.0 78.4519038076 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.