You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that noise may disturb your neighbour.
Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter
introduce yourself
describe your plans for the party
invite your neighbour to come
Write at least 150 words.
You do NOT need to write any addresses.
Begin your letter as follows:
Dear ................. ,
Dear Mr. John,
I am writing this letter to inform you about a party that I am planning on my wife's birthday.
I recently shifted as your neighbour in flat 1104, Crimson along with my family.
Let me explain the party's plan in detail. I am planning to give her a surprize party just when she will arrive home at 8 in the evening. I have called her close friends and some relatives. But I am worried that the loud noise might disturb you. As you may know that surprize partys include a lot of cheering and some music.
I wanted you to please bear with the noise for 1 night. Infact, I wanted you to join us for this occasion, as this will be a great opportunity to know each other. It will be really fantastic.
Hoping to hear from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Amit
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, really, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 638.0 937.175257732 68% => OK
No of words: 146.0 206.0 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.3698630137 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.47606760199 3.78020617076 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.27949486261 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 97.0 127.690721649 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.664383561644 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 188.1 290.88556701 65% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.5 44.8134815571 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 53.1666666667 76.5299724578 69% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.1666666667 16.8248392259 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 4.34317383033 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273359045329 0.216113520407 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0908852061733 0.0766984524023 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0647548850128 0.0603063233224 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112901768207 0.12726935374 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0476360811431 0.0580467560999 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.2 8.37731958763 62% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 84.68 70.7449484536 120% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.4 7.45979381443 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 7.18 8.71597938144 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.37 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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