you recently lost your driving licence and someone sent it back to you. Write a letter to him/her.
How important the licence is to you
Asking how he/she found it
Saying how you would love to thank him/her.
Hi Dave,
I am writing this letter to express my gratitude for returning my lost driving license.
As I live far from my workplace, I have to drive every day. Thus, having a driving license with me is quite crucial. Without it, I have to take bus which is quite exhaustive and time consuming. To be honest, it is frustrating to wait for bus and getting late for work due to irregularities of buses. I was going to get new license but then I heard from you that you found it.
I remember the last time I saw it when I drove to mega mall in downtown. I tried to check at the mall reception when I realized that I missed it. If you could tell me where exactly you found it so that I will be extra cautious next time.
Nevertheless, I really appreciate that you went an extra mile to return it. And, as token of appreciation, I would like to invite you for dinner at my home. Please let me know about your availability so I can make arrangements accordingly. You can follow the address on the license.
Again, thank you very much and I hope to hear from you soon.
Yours sincerely,
Sandip Ramani
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 74, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... when I drove to mega mall in downtown. I tried to check at the mall reception wh...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, if, nevertheless, really, so, then, thus, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 47.0 32.9175257732 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 906.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 208.0 206.0 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.35576923077 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60161462723 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 132.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.634615384615 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 287.1 290.88556701 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 19.1925911631 44.8134815571 43% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 60.4 76.5299724578 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.8666666667 16.8248392259 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 4.34317383033 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.190873750575 0.216113520407 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0627675015575 0.0766984524023 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0589446610543 0.0603063233224 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111910759546 0.12726935374 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0366727373105 0.0580467560999 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.0 8.37731958763 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.42 8.71597938144 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.79 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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