Childhood is the happiest moment of life
I agree with the given statement that "Childhood is the happiest time of a person's life". A child when born has no idea of what the world is like, differences between good and bad, importance of money and many more crucial issues which he learns as he grows up. Children are always happy because they are away from the bad reality of the world.
Primarily, I would like to say that children do not have to deal with any kind of stress whether it may be related to money, their career, family issues or any other type. They are dependent on their parents for everything. Away from the tension of food, clothing and money, they are happy in their own world. Whatever they need, all they have to do is just ask from their parents. I think this is the best thing one can get in a lifetime : relief from stress.
In addition to this, children are not supposed to be responsible for the family. They are free to do whatever they like. According to me, the best enemy and reason for a person's sadness is the responsibility for which he is accountable. Children, on the other hand, do not have to deal with responsibilties, so they are very lively and happy.
Furthermore, I would like to illustrate my point with a real life example. Whenever a person is asked to share his/ her best memory, it is seen that he/she shares a memory from the childhood. Very few people share a memory from adulthood. This is because our childhood is filled with innocence and happiness. We are ourselvesas a kid. A child does not have to think before doing anything. I think this is the best part of childhood. Today's world is just about show-off. everybody does something either to gain the profit or to attract others. But being a child, we are away from this trend of the prevailing society.
In order to conclude, I would like to say that, childhood is the only phase in our lives where we can be ourselves and do anything before thinking. A child is free from responsibilities, stress, tension, concern, career etc. So he is always happy. That is why, I think childhood is the happiest time of a person's life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 79, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a person' or simply 'persons'?
Suggestion: a person; persons
...'Childhood is the happiest time of a persons life'. A child when born has no id...
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Line 5, column 73, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e not supposed to be responsible for the family. They are free to do whatever the...
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Line 5, column 123, Rule ID: ACCORDING_TO_ME[1]
Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
Suggestion: In my opinion; I think
...They are free to do whatever they like. According to me, the best enemy and reason for a person...
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Line 5, column 172, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
... to me, the best enemy and reason for a persons sadness is the responsibility for which...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Everybody
...d. Todays world is just about show-off. everybody does something either to gain the profi...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...ponsibilities, stress, tension, concern, career etc. So he is always happy. That ...
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'persons'' or 'person's'?
Suggestion: persons'; person's
...ink childhood is the happiest time of a persons life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, may, so, i think, in addition, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 30.0 15.1003584229 199% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 52.1666666667 105% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1730.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 380.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.55263157895 4.8611393121 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41515443553 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63991635905 2.67179642975 99% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 212.727598566 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.507894736842 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 535.5 618.680645161 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 16.0 9.59856630824 167% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.51792114695 28% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.6003584229 126% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.1344086022 70% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.8041852498 48.9658058833 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 66.5384615385 100.406767564 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6153846154 20.6045352989 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.03846153846 5.45110844103 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.5376344086 126% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 17.0 11.8709677419 143% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.131240384923 0.236089414692 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0434922240938 0.076458572812 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0956916678673 0.0737576698707 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.089649118618 0.150856017488 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0794357742486 0.0645574589148 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 11.7677419355 62% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 58.1214874552 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.1575268817 63% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.52 10.9000537634 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.03 8.01818996416 88% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 86.8835125448 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.002688172 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.0537634409 76% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.0 Out of 30
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