Some people believe bicycles have lot of advantages, whereas others believe bicycles have more disadvantages?
The invention of bicycle revolutionized the way people use to commute during early days. But advent of engine powered car and motorbikes eclipsed the glory of cycle. Nowadays, cycle is mostly used for recreational and exercise purposes.
To embark on, there are plethora of advantages related to a cycle. Firstly, as cycle does not require any type of fuel to run, therefore there is no harmful emission of exhaust gases and is environment freindly. Secondly, as bicycle work on human power, hence it also helps to keep a person physically fit person riding on it. Thirdly, cycles are very inexpensive and easily affordable to people who buy motorbikes .Lastly, if compared with other vehicles, bicycle is very easy to maintain because there are not complicated parts as seen in internal combustion cars and bikes.
Apart from advantages, there are some disadvantages too that are associated with bicycle too. First of all, in contrast with automobiles, it very difficult to travel long distances as person pedaling the cycle can get easily fatigued. Furthermore, during harsh weathers like raining, extreme cold or hot cycle is not a practical solution for travelling. Moreover, in terms of comfort-ability and safety, bicycle stands nowhere near the automobiles.
To sum up, i think it is easy to deduce that disadvantages are not so pressing against its advantages. It is clear evident that pros outweighs the cons of cycle. Hence, it is the most appropriate method for travelling with in the city because it does not contribute to pollution and maintain the health of rider.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, lastly, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, third, thirdly, apart from, i think, in contrast, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1330.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15503875969 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90879529681 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.631782945736 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.4290555053 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.0 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4285714286 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.5 7.06120827912 177% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141725935241 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0443087969702 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0593438085479 0.0667982634062 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0787263898243 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0267067697363 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.18 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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