Some people think that a person improve intellectuals skills better when doing group activities to what extent do you agree

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...ntation. Intellectual skills are better method of improvements by guessing. Howe...
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...ng. However, a person that more educated their intellectual skills has mostly pol...
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...lop a well successfully person in future by their knowledge.furthermore,these typ...
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...tribune newspaper due to it person known lot of information of intellectual skill...
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... have been so many benefits in they life . furthermore they know the importance ab...
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...ve been so many benefits in they life . furthermore they know the importance about intellec...
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... Secondly, intellectual skills are main importance in all persons life . however...
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...ncing .after that , it types of persons are develop more polishing substance.th...
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...nce.through it they easily done any work due to researches , discovery related to...
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...stan newspaper about intellectual skills . through it gives the information to all...
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...llectual skills as well as understanding . In summary , due to my point of view ...
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...skills of persons develop a more success person in their life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, whereas, for example, in summary, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1728.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.66557377049 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.65312028837 2.80592935109 130% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.459016393443 0.561755894193 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 527.4 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 142.788000977 49.4020404114 289% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 157.090909091 106.682146367 147% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.7272727273 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.81818181818 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 43.0 5.01903807615 857% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170206590253 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0937369603006 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0748092715827 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124125087051 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0400210353749 0.056905535591 70% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.1 13.0946893788 146% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.9 12.4159519038 128% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 9.78957915832 163% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.