Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish.
Why do you think this is happening?
what can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?
Give reason for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Earth is a motherland of every human being. Yet, we witness everyday that we as humans are vandalizing it in every possible way. Excess of garbage and waste is evident almost everywhere. Even though there are efforts made to eradicate this problem but rubbish in our streets are flooding drastically. There are some cause and solutions discussed in this essay.
Firstly, the growing rate of industrialization is alarming to our societies. As, it produce's waste in abundance which can ultimately lead to pollution. For this reason, governments must ensure proper innovation and technological advancements to produce less waste. For example, usage of hybrid generators in production house and recycling of waste being produced from manufacturing.
Secondly, organizations or departments which are responsible for cleaning and disposing waste are short on resources. Governments must provide them adequate equipment's, dumpsters and dump trucks, workforce and training to keep it under control. for instance, different teams with specific tools and equipment's should be allocated across the cities to help producing garbage at minimum.
Lastly, in under develop countries like Pakistan, which is over populated, most of the population is not well educated. Hence, they do not realize this threat. Governments are required to respond actively immensely on any platform along with N.G.O's to educate people. So, that they can take the required measurements. Different awareness campaigns are of essence in each community to overcome this dilemma.
To sum up, there are different factors aiding to excess production of waste. Such as boom in industrialization, less awareness among general public and proper utilization of responsible departments to control it. Thus, governments are needed to constantly tackle such threats efficiently in order to overcome it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 61, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...d of every human being. Yet, we witness everyday that we as humans are vandalizing it in...
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Line 3, column 78, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...alization is alarming to our societies. As, it produces waste in abundance which c...
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Line 5, column 220, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'keeping'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'train' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: keeping
...and dump trucks, workforce and training to keep it under control. for instance, differe...
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Line 5, column 246, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: For
... and training to keep it under control. for instance, different teams with specific...
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Line 5, column 357, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to produce' or 'produce'.
Suggestion: to produce; produce
... be allocated across the cities to help producing garbage at minimum. Lastly, in under...
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Line 7, column 247, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Os
...mmensely on any platform along with N.G.Os to educate people. So, that they can ta...
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Line 7, column 269, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[4]
Message: “So , that” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...rm along with N.G.Os to educate people. So, that they can take the required measurements...
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Line 9, column 134, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...industrialization, less awareness among general public and proper utilization of responsible d...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, thus, well, for example, for instance, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1586.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.66428571429 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11607910355 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.646428571429 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 504.0 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.5671392184 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.3 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0 20.7667163134 67% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.95 7.06120827912 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166689847951 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0411753831055 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0406343607707 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0791270850794 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0464725537186 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 40.34 50.2224549098 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.96 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.69 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.