The graph shows the demand for electricity in England during typical in winter and summer. The pie chart shows how electricity is used in an average English home.
The line graph illustrates, the necessity of electric power, during distinctive days of winter and summer, in England, and the pie chart depicts, how an average English home consumes electricity. The data is calibrated in 'units of electricity' and 'percentage'.
It is clear from the line graph that, initially the demand of electricity, is about 35,000 units of electricity, and around 18,000 units, in winter and summer respectively. In winter, consumption of electricity started fluctuating and after half of the day, it rises to 40,000 units, whereas in summer, there are very small change in the same lap of time. Moreover, in winter, uses of electricity increases, between 12 to 21 hours. Beside this, there are decreasing trend in summer. Finally, after 24 hours, demand of electricity is same as initial in both cases.
Moving further, it is seen from pie chart that, the majority of electricity, used for heating room, and heating water, which is 52.5%. While, the proportion of electricity, used in the case of oven, kettles and washing machines, extremely reduced to 17.5%. However, 15% of total electric energy, used for lighting, TV, radio and same amount of power, used for vacuum cleaner, food mixer and electric tools.
Overall analysis, it is observed that, large number of units of electricity, used in winter. Whereas, least amount of electric energy consumes in summer. However, more than half of the electric power, used for heating rooms and water, and only few percent has used for vacuum cleaner food mixer and electric tools.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 467, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'trends'?
Suggestion: trends
...ours. Beside this, there are decreasing trend in summer. Finally, after 24 hours, dem...
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Line 7, column 94, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...f units of electricity, used in winter. Whereas, least amount of electric energy consum...
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Line 7, column 101, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[3]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: ', the least'.
Suggestion: , the least
... of electricity, used in winter. Whereas, least amount of electric energy consumes in s...
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Line 7, column 245, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun percent seems to be countable; consider using: 'few percents'.
Suggestion: few percents
...d for heating rooms and water, and only few percent has used for vacuum cleaner food mixer ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, however, moreover, whereas, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 6.8 191% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 33.7804878049 127% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1306.0 965.302439024 135% => OK
No of words: 253.0 196.424390244 129% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16205533597 4.92477711251 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69101754053 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 135.0 106.607317073 127% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533596837945 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 405.9 283.868780488 143% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.482926829268 828% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 3.36585365854 238% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.8511808437 43.030603864 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.461538462 112.824112599 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4615384615 22.9334400587 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.23076923077 5.23603664747 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 1.69756097561 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.40106700358 0.215688989381 186% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.137098683936 0.103423049105 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100913381157 0.0843802449381 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.264570471365 0.15604864568 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101964420189 0.0819641961636 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.2329268293 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 61.2550243902 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 11.4140731707 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.39 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 40.7170731707 150% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.4329268293 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.