TPO-46 - Integrated Writing Task
Both the reading and the lecture discuss the advantages and disadvantages of medical records in an electronic database and in paper-based keeping. The author says that electronic database is better than a paper database and provides three reasons to support this claim. The professor, on the contrary, refuses all those reasons and says that electronic record's benefits are uncertain and provide three compelling reasons to reject the author's point of view.
Firstly, the reading points out that using the electronic record decrease the cost. The lecturer, by contrast, casts doubt on this reason by saying that this decrease is insignificant and would not be plausible. Moreover, all the doctors who use electronic records keep paper because of the original signature and for a legal affair; Therefore, they have to pay storage cost. As a result, using the electronic records would not better than a paper-based record.
Secondly, the reading passage asserts that electronic records eliminate mistakes which may be done by doctors. The lecturer, in contrast, refutes this idea by arguing that most doctors use pen and paper to write the patients' medical background, so they use paper-based record by hand. Consequently, office's staffs read that writing and insert them in an electronic record, so staffs cannot identify the errors which were made by doctors. Therefore, medical errors still are available in electronic records.
Finally, the author contends that the electronic medical record would help researcher because they can use those record. The speaker, on the other hand, avers that using electronic records do not benefit researchers because it would be difficult for them to access those sort of information. In this regard, there is strict privacy law that prohibits researchers to have medical information, and researcher has to follow the procedure and privacy law. As a result, electronic medical records do not take it for granted to use them as a research source. Even a patient can block the accessibility to his or her medical record
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 266, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this sort' or 'those nulls'?
Suggestion: this sort; those nulls
...t would be difficult for them to access those sort of information. In this regard, there i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, finally, first, firstly, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, as to, in contrast, sort of, as a result, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.4613686534 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 5.04856512141 158% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 7.30242825607 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 12.0772626932 108% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 22.412803532 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 30.3222958057 96% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 5.01324503311 40% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1737.0 1373.03311258 127% => OK
No of words: 327.0 270.72406181 121% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3119266055 5.08290768461 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.04702891845 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76125960587 2.5805825403 107% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 145.348785872 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.48623853211 0.540411800872 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 540.9 419.366225166 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.55342163355 109% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 2.5761589404 194% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 13.0662251656 122% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 21.2450331126 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.3153788672 49.2860985944 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.5625 110.228320801 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4375 21.698381199 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.875 7.06452816374 154% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 4.19205298013 24% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 4.45695364238 179% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.27373068433 47% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.552972374202 0.272083759551 203% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.221566212143 0.0996497079465 222% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102187161833 0.0662205650399 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.355879989593 0.162205337803 219% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0562192150738 0.0443174109184 127% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.3589403974 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 53.8541721854 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.0289183223 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.2367328918 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.42419426049 99% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 63.6247240618 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.7273730684 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.498013245 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.2008830022 125% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.0 Out of 30
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