People have different job expectations for jobs. Some people prefer to do the same job for the same company, whereas others prefer to change jobs frequently.
Write about the advantages and disadvantages of each viewpoint?
Everything has two sides and job preference is not an exception. Continuing the same profession is preferred by a group of people while others prefer to change their position regularly. Both benefits and drawbacks will be discussed in this writing.
Firstly, one benefit of remaining in the same job is that the person becomes efficient in his tasks. As a result, a good position is offered in the company for this type of skilled employee. Secondly, continuation of job is necessary for some profession like doctor, lawyer, machine operator etc. Because specific trainings are necessary to develop skills in these fields. Furthermore, one will get job security if he continues to do same work under the same employee for long period of time.
However, some people find it better to change the present job because it creates more opportunity for them. For example, in a new environment, they could get the opportunity to learn new things. It opens the door for them to increase their income as well. One can get monotonous by remaining in the same profession. It generally decreases the quality of work. Additionally, modern employers do not pay any heed to the loyalty of the old employees. Generally, most of the old workers are deprived of getting any benefits for their commitment. Furthermore, the way of getting promotion can be easier by changing jobs.
In conclusion, while one could get benefit, by continuing same job for the similar company, like job security, other would get advantage by changing profession like increasing income. Both of the sides have drawbacks like dullness, limited skills respectively.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 478, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...e work under the same employee for long period of time. However, some people find it better...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1367.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.13909774436 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87130689782 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.567669172932 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.9649842066 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.9444444444 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.7777777778 20.7667163134 71% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.44444444444 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.362993357041 0.244688304435 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0996816402012 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0889344940243 0.0667982634062 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.227810736276 0.151304729494 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0288376160224 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 50.2224549098 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.3001002004 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.94 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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