Technology, while apparently aimed to simplify our lives, only makes our lives more complicated.
The technology is improving day by day and one it is a necessity to adapt to better technologies in order to upgrade oneself in life. However growing technology has many pros and cons.
Advanced technology provides us more ways to look into a problem. Complicated issues can be solved easily with the help of technology. New technologies have led to many new startup's and overall helping to improve the economy of the country. Many new inventions in the field of Information Technology, Electronics and communication are helping mankind in many ways making their lives simpler. For example, in 90's there were there was no internet and there was less access to television and radios where it was difficult to know what's happening around the world. Now at present most of the people have access to internet and news where they can get to know most of the new technologies and thus technology is trying to make our life simpler. Back in 90's there were less modes for transportation and not everyone used to have a cell phone which was making it difficult to communicate. Now with the help of new technologies we are able to reach any part of the world within a few hours.
However due to increase in technology, people are becoming lazy. Teenagers who should be enthusiastic, are leaning more towards technology and giving less importance to their health and other outdoor activities. They are more active through social networks rather than being active in reality. Due to lack of participation in outdoor activities like sports, people are becoming obese and afffected by many health problems.
However technology is trying to make our lives easier, but humans making it more complicated. So technology should be taken in a positive way. One should not forget our basic responsibility due to advanced technology.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 135, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...es in order to upgrade oneself in life. However growing technology has many pros and co...
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Line 3, column 528, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: what's
...d radios where it was difficult to know whats happening around the world. Now at pres...
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Line 3, column 764, Rule ID: FEWER_LESS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'fewer'? The noun modes is countable.
Suggestion: fewer
...ur life simpler. Back in 90s there were less modes for transportation and not everyo...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
... afffected by many health problems. However technology is trying to make our lives ...
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Line 7, column 125, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a positive way" with adverb for "positive"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...plicated. So technology should be taken in a positive way. One should not forget our basic respon...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, so, thus, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 19.5258426966 102% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 12.4196629213 40% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.3162921348 35% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 33.0505617978 42% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 58.6224719101 80% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 12.9106741573 39% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1517.0 2235.4752809 68% => OK
No of words: 304.0 442.535393258 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99013157895 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17559525986 4.55969084622 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86095532238 2.79657885939 102% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 215.323595506 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.523026315789 0.4932671777 106% => OK
syllable_count: 490.5 704.065955056 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 6.24550561798 16% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.99550561798 20% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.7576175825 60.3974514979 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.2352941176 118.986275619 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8823529412 23.4991977007 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.64705882353 5.21951772744 51% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 7.80617977528 64% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.150767371172 0.243740707755 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0550814930417 0.0831039109588 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0855902751863 0.0758088955206 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107315264257 0.150359130593 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109669213613 0.0667264976115 164% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 14.1392134831 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 48.8420337079 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.1639044944 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.38706741573 94% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 100.480337079 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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