A nation should require all of its students to study the same national curriculum until they enter college.
Implementing same national curriculum all over the country for school children is impotant in many ways. The curriculum should include the basic well-rounded knowledge about society and the environment in which children are living. This is the most important step to make them to imbibe good morals and helping them to evolve as good citizens in the society.
As I mentioned, it is very important to have similar nation wide curriculum. For a country like India which is completely diversified with many culture, language and religion, having a basic knowledge about the society and laws of the country is important for a child. For example, India has 28 states and most of the states are different in their own ways in terms of language and culture. So it is important for the students to have general knowledge of all the state's culture and their importance. This will develop a sense of democracy, soverenity and integrity among children.
Secondly, for school students the basic knowldege of well-rounded fields of the society is important. For example, the curriculum should include subjects from various fields like Mathematics, Science, Geography, History, Economics,etc. to make children knowledgeable in all fields. This will help them to decide about their interests and future. Leisure and sports is also an important aspect and should be considered as a part of curriculum which will make them strong physically as well as mentally.
In addition to that, having a similar curiculum will create equal opportunities among children from different states. For example, if a student from Delhi and a student from Mumbai are applying for an university in abroad for higher studies, curriculum should not be an issue in deciding whose profile is better. So it is important to have similar curriculum all over the nation.
Therefore, a similar curriculum has a lot advantages. It will develop a sense of integrity among children which is very important in current society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 54, Rule ID: NATION_WIDE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nationwide'?
Suggestion: nationwide
...d, it is very important to have similar nation wide curriculum. For a country like India wh...
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Line 3, column 140, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun culture seems to be countable; consider using: 'many cultures'.
Suggestion: many cultures
...ia which is completely diversified with many culture, language and religion, having a basic ...
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Line 5, column 231, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , etc
..., Science, Geography, History, Economics,etc. to make children knowledgeable in all ...
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Line 7, column 199, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
... a student from Mumbai are applying for an university in abroad for higher studies...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, for example, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.5258426966 82% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 33.0505617978 48% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 58.6224719101 72% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1669.0 2235.4752809 75% => OK
No of words: 320.0 442.535393258 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.215625 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88217684388 2.79657885939 103% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 215.323595506 67% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.453125 0.4932671777 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 530.1 704.065955056 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.99550561798 60% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 20.2370786517 89% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.3899328727 60.3974514979 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.7222222222 118.986275619 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7777777778 23.4991977007 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.72222222222 5.21951772744 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 7.80617977528 51% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 10.2758426966 136% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 5.13820224719 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.83258426966 83% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.158349444967 0.243740707755 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0625467254055 0.0831039109588 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0690810270484 0.0758088955206 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0994054319496 0.150359130593 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0454427301665 0.0667264976115 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 14.1392134831 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 48.8420337079 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 12.1743820225 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.7 12.1639044944 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.38706741573 96% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 100.480337079 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.