The impact that the growing demand for more flights has had on the environment is a major concern for many countries. Some people believe that one way to limit the number of people travelling by air is to increase tax on flights.
To what extent do you think this could solve the problem?
Increased pollution has become an important concern for the majority of nations and unlike other transportation overuse of aircraft for travelling has elevated the problem. Section of society believes that in order to control the use of air means, authorities should raise existing excise on aircraft. However, in my opinion, this could not solve the issue as there are other things which need consideration.
To begin with, let’s understand the type of people using aircraft as means of transportation. Majority of the air passengers are those who have enough money at their dispersal, thus, increasing taxes on the flight ticket would not affect them as they will still be able to afford it. On the other hand, it will affect normal people, who use it once in a while for an emergency situation. However, restricting the number of air journey one can have in particular month or year would be better to limit frequent travellers.
It’s true that more flights mean more emission of carbon-dioxide in the air, however, they cannot be held completely responsible for the rise of greenhouse gases. For instance, today society, in general, has become mobile that means people are prepared to commute in their own vehicles rather than utilising public transport. This has contributed majorly to the hick of pollution level. Therefore, motivating and encouraging folks to opt for public means of transport could serve to save the environment.
In conclusion, it can state that raising taxes would not help to eradicate the issue, however, motivating and encouraging people to limit the use of fuel-based transportation could provide a certain relief to the concern
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, so, still, therefore, thus, while, for instance, in conclusion, in general, in particular, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1408.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23420074349 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89760676843 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.598513011152 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.2019643329 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.333333333 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4166666667 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.6666666667 7.06120827912 179% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226438626471 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0744358768222 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0443283472947 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129478727929 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0191899544935 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.01 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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