Some people say that best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required.
Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
It is true that people ought to maintain healthy physic and look for the ways to maintain fit. Some people believe that by developing the quantity of sports sports facilities is useful for health, others think it will show only a small impact on health and there are other methods to gain a health. In my opinion, sports are useful for people to keep them energetic and enthusiastic.
On the one hand, I agree that people who play sports for certain hours in a day can burn the fat gradually which was stored in the body. Moreover, choosing some critical sports are also very useful to eliminate some diseases. For example, soccer is a toughest game which designed to run in grounds, this play is helpful for heart, legs and body. Furthermore, science states that sports can increase the human life rate and bring enormous benefits for people.
On the other hand, people can also maintain their body healthy by following other methods. Firstly, regular exercises in gym and lifting weights will strengthen the muscles and body. Secondly, maintaining the healthy diet such as eating raw food, caloric food surplus the body with rich vitamins and nutrients. Finally, people especially elders who are not able to follow these methods are able to stay healthy, if they follow natural daily practices like walking, jogging and running if possible.
In conclusion, there are several methods to keep the body healthy, I agree that sports are the major source of maintaining a good physic which keeps people fit and healthy, governments and authorities initiate to increase its facilities for public.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, thus, for example, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1335.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45671187495 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.573033707865 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 402.3 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.2287896489 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.25 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.25 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.9166666667 7.06120827912 211% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161389221869 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0581392033849 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0547742956067 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0988250211566 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.052416486457 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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