An English speaking friend is coming to spend a week in your hometown. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:. offer to find a place to stay. give suggestions abut what to do in a week.. inform about the clothes to be brought.
Hello Rushnan,
I am delighted to lean about your upcoming visit to Shanghai. As you know it is my hometown, I would be certainly the best person to offer you some personalized suggestion. The central area has all the attraction, therefore choosing it as the base will allow you to explore the city as much as possible, while staying close to your conference venue. If you want I can look for some hotels in your preferred budget near the conference venue you have mentioned in our last conversation.
First of all, as you will have only one week here, I would recommend you to visit the night market, exhibition center, science museum and the Pier area. You can also schedule cruising and nightlife for the weekends as otherwise you will miss the best part of this happening city!
Secondly, please pack light and wisely. You will be traveling here next month and though it is summer, do not forget to carry some warm clothes. In the evening it is very chilly. You might also prefer to carry raincoats to cope up with the unpredictable weather.
Last but not the least, do not forget to keep me posted about your flight information. Me and my family is eagerly waiting to see you.
With love,
Shahla
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, you know, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.85567010309 207% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1006.0 937.175257732 107% => OK
No of words: 214.0 206.0 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70093457944 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51891265307 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.626168224299 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 306.0 290.88556701 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.5431209487 44.8134815571 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.8333333333 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8333333333 16.8248392259 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 4.34317383033 173% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.109254803906 0.216113520407 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0426793173252 0.0766984524023 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0447274096158 0.0603063233224 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0686276763044 0.12726935374 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0458920526375 0.0580467560999 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.6 8.37731958763 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.68 8.71597938144 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.