It is often considered that change is more beneficial to people than trying to avoid it and have everything remain the same. Do you think the advantages of change outweigh the disadvantages?
It is frequently argued that alteration benefit individuals more than preventing it to happen. I firmly believe that the positive effects of change are greater than its drawback. This essay will discuss why general improvement and having new perspective in life is more advantageous than the period of acceptance.
To begin with, change can make a person be a better version of himself. To improve one's attitude requires someone to change their habit. For example, laziness is a negative attribute of an individual but he can develop into being industrious by simply overcoming the resistance of this unwanted trait. Moreover, people can widen their horizon for personal growth by adapting changes to the direction of their lives. For instance, to migrate and change one's residence is a hard decision to make but a rewarding move afterwards because of the benefits of having more opportunities abroad.
On the other hand, the time to adjust and adapt to such changes would take too long for others. They believe that not all changes are applicable to a situation and some may feel that it is one-sided idea. This especially true for those individuals who are used to doing it everyday, yet at an instant there came another rule to follow. To illustrate this, a new policy is announced for corporate workers to refrain from taking a leave for the rest of the year, so the tendency is they would resist not having that holiday break.
To sum up, the benefits of having change far outweighs the downside of it due to proliferation and brand new vision for the former and the time of approval for the latter. Indeed, it can be said that change is a variable aspect that cannot be avoided and must be embraced on.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, may, moreover, so, for example, for instance, to begin with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1424.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84353741497 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65509254174 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.591836734694 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 463.5 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.9098906685 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.714285714 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206602653629 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0744143907992 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0358271678865 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130222343015 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0382446837684 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.