Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding changes. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Many individuals utilize their whole life doing the repetitive task by neglecting changes. On the other hand, rest of the individual believe that change is always better. Evolution is one of the great examples of change in nature. In this essay, I will discuss both ways in detail in the following paragraphs.
On the one hand, Government jobs in India are one of the main examples of life without changes. Most of the government jobs in India has stability, security and steady growth. Moreover the repetitive task in the work, for an instance, the job of clerk in accounts office is to file the documents and the job of a typewriter in the high court is always to type the complete session in court. Still, the government jobs are more in demands and popular in Indian society as it provides the stability and other benefits to an individual to live a happy life.
On the other hand, Private jobs are more versatile and advanced in their work structure and are always in the continual improvement flow. The people who want to earn quick money and live lavish lifestyle always prefer to deal in private sectors. As private sector is growing one with rapid rate and people their always believe in change and improvements. Private jobs in India are extraordinary different as people shift their jobs before reaching it to saturation levels.
In conclusion, both the lifestyle have their own benefits and drawbacks. In my opinion, the change in life is a must, especially in the younger generation to fulfil their dreams and goals.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 178, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Moreover,
...stability, security and steady growth. Moreover the repetitive task in the work, for an...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, moreover, so, still, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1278.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85931558935 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62708202144 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.505703422053 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 410.4 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.6456884446 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.2857142857 106.682146367 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7857142857 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.14285714286 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.175738510483 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0652202571501 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0385122415187 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115915485556 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0488847546475 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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