today world is safer than previous year so government should not spent so much money on the armed force but some disagree with this . discuss both view.
This is 21st era and it is so advanced and developed century that everything is possible as compared yo bygone era . In last 10 decades safety was the major issue and government had spent a lot of money on their armed force but nowadays, this senerio has changed . Most people think that investment on the military should be limited but few disagree with this.
first and foremostly , the common trouble which today's population is facing is disease full environment . The major contributing factor is pollution. Cancer , obesity , tuberculosis are some major diseases which lead to death. To root out these ailments from the nation government needs a high amount of money so they will be able to focus on this issue rather than armed force. Furthermore , the chances of wars and conflicts are less from past time and it can be clearly analysed from the data which are provided by authorities itself.
On the flipside , as natural disasters are unpredictable the wars and the fights between two countries are also unpredictable. If there be a surprising military attack from any other region then it is momentous a strong defence services with advanced weapons to tackle them
To recapitulate , army or navy are pillars for the nation so it is significant to spend money on them because safety of population is totally depend on them but it should be in limited amount so other problems can also be curbed out.
- toady school should teach their students how to survive financially in the world today To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement 64
- today world is safer than previous year so government should not spent so much money on the armed force but some disagree with this . discuss both view. 56
- toady school should teach their students how to survive financially in the world today .. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement ? 56
- it has become very common for people to borrow money most of people have a credit card a mortgage and often they will buy a car on credit as well is this goid idea or is it too risky discuss both views and give ur in opinion 59
- toady school should teach their students how to survive financially in the world today .. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement ? 65
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1165.0 1615.20841683 72% => OK
No of words: 239.0 315.596192385 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87447698745 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.93187294222 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69747817926 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.623430962343 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 376.2 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 87.5127990639 49.4020404114 177% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.5 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.9 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.3 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225232980953 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0737431866441 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0661923023521 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123630645026 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0778103408787 0.056905535591 137% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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