You and your friend are planning a picnic in the countryside. Write:
Which arrangements have you already done?
Other activities that can be done
How can your friend help with the arrangements?
Dear Smith,
I hope you're doing well. I hope you are also excited like me about our picnic in the countryside. I am writing to let you know about my ideas and planning for picnic. I have already decided a decent place near river where we would place our tent and most of people prefer that place. This way we would also get chance to interact with other people. I think it is the perfect place where we could enjoy nature beauty and fresh air. I have all safety gear, fold-able tent and tableware lying in my house that is required for picnic. I will also arrange snacks and beverages however you could also bring your favorite ones.
There are also other activities we could enjoy. As there is river nearby we can do fishing but that would probably need fishing gear that we have to buy. I have also heard that we can hire bicycles from there at minimal cost by which we can explore area. I wonder if you could bring some kind of music equipment so we can enjoy calm music with the nature of beauty.
I also would like to know what you think about this. Have you any other idea and plan that will make picnic more interesting.
I am looking forward to hearing from you.
With love,
Anonymous
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 8, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you're
Dear Smith, I hope youre doing well. I hope you are also excite...
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Line 3, column 45, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...pe youre doing well. I hope you are also excited like me about our picnic in the ...
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Line 3, column 100, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...me about our picnic in the countryside. I am writing to let you know about my ide...
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Line 3, column 169, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...about my ideas and planning for picnic. I have already decided a decent place nea...
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Line 3, column 252, Rule ID: MOST_SOME_OF_NNS[1]
Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the people') or simply say ''most people''.
Suggestion: most of the people; most people
...river where we would place our tent and most of people prefer that place. This way we would al...
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Line 3, column 503, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ble tent and tableware lying in my house that is required for picnic. I will also...
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Line 3, column 534, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... my house that is required for picnic. I will also arrange snacks and beverages ...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ALSO_OTHER[1]
Message: Use simply 'there are other' or 'there are also'
Suggestion: There are other; There are also
...ould also bring your favorite ones. There are also other activities we could enjoy. As there is ...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...alm music with the nature of beauty. I also would like to know what you think ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, so, well, i think, kind of, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 4.92783505155 304% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.03092783505 297% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 42.0 32.9175257732 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 990.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 224.0 206.0 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.41964285714 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.01706684903 2.54303337028 79% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580357142857 0.622605031667 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 315.0 290.88556701 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.5247048122 44.8134815571 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 61.875 76.5299724578 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.0 16.8248392259 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.125 4.34317383033 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 2.54639175258 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.270798160214 0.216113520407 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0888376102652 0.0766984524023 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0490105256927 0.0603063233224 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152487731424 0.12726935374 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0466061999686 0.0580467560999 80% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.4 8.37731958763 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.76 8.71597938144 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.38 7.59969072165 84% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.