The table below gives information about favourite pastimes in different countries in pecentage.
The given tabular chart depicts the information about seven pastimes which were performed in by the age of 30-50 in eight different nations. The data is calibrated in per centum. It is clearly and coherently represented.
Overall, it is evident that reading was the best pastime activity which was performed by all the eight countries; while Japan was a country who participate only in reading.
It can be seen that canada people spent their time on tv, sport, reading, hobbies was 60%, 22%, 15% and 40% respectively; whereas England population spent their time only in reading, hobbies and music. Moreover, Australian people spent their most time for watching tv rather then doing other activities.
Apart from all this, In Korea : 22% people prefer tv, 60% people prefer to reading, 45% people prefer hobbies, 2% people prefer music and beach, and only 4% prefer sleep; Like this USA also participated in all activities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 276, Rule ID: RATHER_THEN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'than'? 'than' is used for comparisons, 'then' is an expression of time.
Suggestion: than
... their most time for watching tv rather then doing other activities. Apart from ...
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Line 7, column 21, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...her activities. Apart from all this, In Korea : 22% people prefer tv, 60% peo...
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Line 7, column 77, Rule ID: PREFER_TO_VBG[1]
Message: Did you mean 'read'?
Suggestion: read
... people prefer tv, 60% people prefer to reading, 45% people prefer hobbies, 2% people...
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Line 7, column 85, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...prefer tv, 60% people prefer to reading, 45% people prefer hobbies, 2% people pr...
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Line 7, column 113, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... to reading, 45% people prefer hobbies, 2% people prefer music and beach, and on...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...sic and beach, and only 4% prefer sleep; Like this USA also participated in all a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so, then, whereas, while, apart from
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 15.0 33.7804878049 44% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 779.0 965.302439024 81% => OK
No of words: 152.0 196.424390244 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.125 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51124308557 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58701364184 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.671052631579 0.547539520022 123% => OK
syllable_count: 223.2 283.868780488 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.33902439024 46% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.0072459963 43.030603864 160% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.285714286 112.824112599 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7142857143 22.9334400587 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 5.23603664747 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0704183855805 0.215688989381 33% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0357913529427 0.103423049105 35% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0648224763421 0.0843802449381 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0546102029356 0.15604864568 35% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0625364684005 0.0819641961636 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.2329268293 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.47 11.4140731707 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.06136585366 107% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 40.7170731707 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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