Some people think that when a person travels into a different culture they should adapt to the local practices and customs.
To what extent do you agree?
With the increase in the globalisation, more people are travelling from one place to another. Section of society, argue that visitors should comply with the cultural values and tradition of the host country. However, there are others who opine native countries should welcome the tourist with their values. This essay, stress on the combination of both for better understanding between two nations.
The first group of people believes that visitors travel to understand the cultural differences and enjoy traditions of different places. Therefore, if visitor shows respect towards the host society, local people will accept and welcome them more enthusiastically. Thus, they will feel more comfortable to interact with local inhabitants and avoid conflicts during their trip. Further, this would ease in communication and understand the host nation more effectively, which may fulfil the purpose of their visit.
On the other hand, people who think that people should respect tourist’s culture believe introducing new culture would be better for the society. These days, tourism is big business and support economy to a great extent. Therefore, people and the government should be flexible and admit other cultures if they want to succeed in the tourism industry. Actually, a lot of countries are competing with each other to attract more visitors and making their nations the desired destination and without respecting different cultures, they may be lost in this maddening race.
After analysing both the viewpoints, it could be concluded that it is essential for both the local-hides and visitors to adapt to each other values and customs for the success of this new trend of travelling more often.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, first, however, if, may, so, therefore, thus, on the other hand, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1449.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42696629213 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77430269801 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.558052434457 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.5123720245 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.461538462 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5384615385 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.07692307692 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183228657891 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.069970166793 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.05209860012 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.110158765056 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0403760945379 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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