Some people like to record their life by sharing pictures and other information on social-networking sites. Others keep this information to themselves and never share it online. Which do you prefer?

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Some people like to record their life by sharing pictures and other information on social-networking sites. Others keep this information to themselves and never share it online. Which do you prefer?

Recording life is a basic part of our daily life. In order to grasp some important and valuable moment of our life, we take pictures and videos and keep diary. Some people tend to keep this kind of information a secret while other tends to share it online. As far as I am concerned, I prefer the latter way. Here are my reasons.

Firstly, sharing makes the experience more funny and enjoyable. Studies show that people smile more when they have company, which indicates that being in a group can add up the sense of happiness. This is the same applies to the sharing information. By sharing, you actually put yourselves in a group, and everything you post online can get some feedback from your friends. For instance, when you post a picture of a delicate snacks you made, your friends would praise you for your cooking skills, which gives you a sense of achievement.

Besides,people can get to know each other better and expand their social relationship by sharing their life experience online. Funny experience contributes to increase your personal charm so that you can attract more people to make friends with you. Take my sister for an example. She is fond of traveling and wherever she travels she takes pictures of the beautiful scenes and landscapes and shares it on Facebook. This enable peers with the same hobbies to learn about her and try to contact with her. She makes a good many new friends in this way.

Indeed, posting everything online might lead to the leak of personal information and therefore bring risks to my safety. Those who choose to keep their information on their own might want to protect themselves in this way. However, the risk can be reduced if we carefully select the kinds of information we want to post online. For instance, you can still post a picture about your fancy new car, but remember to hide the car number. Then you can still enjoy the benefits of sharing while keeping yourselves in a relative safe position at the same time.

In conclusion, I prefer to share my information online instead of keeping them to my own because it not only bring more fun but also offer my opportunity to acquaint with more friends.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 8, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , people
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Line 5, column 174, Rule ID: PERSONAL_OPINION_FRIENDSHIP[1]
Message: Use simply 'charm'.
Suggestion: charm
...experience contributes to increase your personal charm so that you can attract more people to ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, besides, but, first, firstly, however, if, so, still, then, therefore, while, for instance, in conclusion, kind of

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 15.1003584229 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 13.8261648746 94% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 56.0 43.0788530466 130% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 52.1666666667 96% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.0752688172 161% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1793.0 1977.66487455 91% => OK
No of words: 380.0 407.700716846 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.71842105263 4.8611393121 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41515443553 4.48103885553 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52627604135 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 202.0 212.727598566 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.531578947368 0.524837075471 101% => OK
syllable_count: 558.9 618.680645161 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.59856630824 115% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.974534783 48.9658058833 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.5 100.406767564 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2727272727 20.6045352989 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.90909090909 5.45110844103 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.5376344086 36% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 11.8709677419 118% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.357526627606 0.236089414692 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0940990466746 0.076458572812 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0829357995785 0.0737576698707 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192106570883 0.150856017488 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0696112957757 0.0645574589148 108% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 11.7677419355 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.8 10.9000537634 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.26 8.01818996416 91% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 86.8835125448 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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