Learning to play a team sport is an important part of child's education. Do you agree or disagree? Give reason for your answer and relevant example from your experience or knowledge.
Team sports date back to several thousand of years when people displayed their valour in arenas and developed a sportman spirit. The name of such legends has been forever etched in history and this is why we want our children to play these games as well.
Learning to play team sports is an important part of child's education because not only it is good for body but also for mind. First of all, team sports build our patience level. These days younger generation does not have enough patience which is why they are so stubborn and do not cooperate, rather, it should be said that they do not know how to. While in team they will have to cooperate with others and come at par with team decisions whether he likes it or not, gradually building up patience in a person. If we use this ideology at early stages of life then kids will subconsciously retain it.
Infact, team sports inculcate other ethical values as well, such as: leadership quality and bonding. For instance, I and my team were doing routine drills for basketball tournament. Our coach used to increase our punishment if any one of us slacked off or gave up easily on training. However, other team players motivated that particular guy and this is how we became such a good friends. Their is a famous saying, "people who bear the same pain can understand each other better".
To cap it all I would say that not only me but everyone would agree that learning team sport is a very crucial part of a child's education.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 513, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ually building up patience in a person. If we use this ideology at early stages of...
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Line 3, column 390, Rule ID: THEIR_IS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'there'?
Suggestion: There
...s is how we became such a good friends. Their is a famous saying, 'people who be...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, then, well, while, for instance, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1225.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.58801498127 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46138948324 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.651685393258 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 373.5 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.501854928 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.2307692308 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5384615385 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.84615384615 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213239389495 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0745838249005 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.080067294031 0.0667982634062 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126888821213 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0518956721044 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 68.1 50.2224549098 136% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 12.4159519038 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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