Some people believe that pressing natural environment is crucial. However, most make no effort to do so. Why do you think this is happening? What are some simple actions that could help the environment?
In this undoubtedly the case that environment pollution. Which is also effecting the society adversely. In this essay, i will examine the possible reason for this phenomenon and suggest some of the practical policies individual could implement take to mend the environment.
The first step to understand why the preserving of natural environment is crucial and why people not do effort also give solutions? Broadly speaking, there are two main reasons for this. The first and foremost is the standard of living the every person wants the luxury life for them so they also ignore the natural environment and also depends upon artificial facilities. As a result, for their on benefit they cut the trees which are the reason of the deforestation and effect the environment. The best solution of this should people control their needs and grow the plants more and more so the natural environment is cannot be effect. A good illustration here is in asam there are more greenery ao their is less diseases.
The second reason of this the industrialization. Apart from this, the not single individual also the government build more industries for there income which create the more pollution and damage the surroundings badly. As a result, the specific types of pollution is occur such as : air pollution, noise pollution and also the water pollution. So there the government ignore the pollution and focus there profit. A best or suitable solution here is the government take restrictions on all types of pollution, to give the order of penality reson for the pollution.
In conclusion there, all varieties of different factors that have led to make this problem worst while it may not be possible to find a complete solution of this, it could be probably solve by to do effort both individual as well as government to protect the environment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, may, second, so, well, while, apart from, broadly speaking, in conclusion, such as, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 27.0 8.3376753507 324% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1539.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02941176471 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86037259306 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.506535947712 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 487.8 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.1887426102 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.6 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.26666666667 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196329184751 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0664633983213 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0762739785189 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119358100976 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0596695361397 0.056905535591 105% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.