Some people argue that technological inventions such as mobile phones making people less interactive. Do you agree or disagree
Some people are of opinion that new developments in technology leads to less interaction among people. In my opinion, only if this technology is used in excess, it could have detrimental effects on social interaction otherwise there are evident facts that it has brought the world closer.
Admittedly, incessant use of technology leads to social isolation. This trend is common in all demographics particularly youngsters, they choose text over phone call, email over in person conversation that in turn put layers between then them and others. This not only makes individual less interactive but also show lack of social etiquette which not a good trend for society as a whole. It is also evident from fact that memberships in community clubs in cities have decreased remarkably as people like to spend time alone over interacting with others in community.
However, technology can be useful if used for limited period without compromising with daily need of face to face interaction. With invent of social media platforms like Twitter and Facebook, people can stay in touch with long lost school friends ad old acquaintances which earlier was lost due to lack of touch. Also, technology particularly internet have given chance to many people with common interest across globe to interact on many platforms. This have not only enhanced the community interaction but also developed tolerance among different communities which is an essence of good community.
In conclusion, indeed technology is taking over human interactions to large extend. But if used cautiously it is an excellent tool to enhance human interaction which was not possible without technology.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...as not possible without technology.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, then, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1408.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33333333333 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90122832667 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602272727273 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 450.0 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.3834426575 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.333333333 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.16666666667 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133344166902 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.055397506369 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0561274581566 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0848240908032 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0410155576768 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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