Do the advantages of the study abroad outweigh its disadvantages.
In fact that, have some problems of education in the developing countries and the approach a modern education is a burning issue in today’s society. In my perspective, the pros and cons of learning oversea are equally significant.
On the one hand, students in highly education country have a lot of benefits. Concerning the first, by far greatest is that people can get more knowledge and improving their skill such as: teamwork, leader, community… Actually, students can learn all newest research of top point scientist on the world and do more some research by themselves. For instance, most of students can speak English very fluently after two years. Another negative important that needs to be taken into account is that a large employments opportunities. Indeed, applicants who have a good certificate can apply many firms with high salary annual. Aside that employer can offer opportunity immigration for workers if they meet all condition from authority in immigration programs.
On the other hand, there are some concerns about the influence of living cost in other country. The main drawback is high expenditure of students in the oversea. According many recent surveys, most of universities have a high fee about 20.000-40.000 USD per year and living cost estimates from 10.000-20.000 USD per years, meanwhile in the developing countries family’s income about 10.000-30.000 USD per. Therefore, despite most parents hope their children is going to abroad for study, but with big expenses are a barrier for their dream. Another negative aspect is the loss of traditions and habits. Increasingly culture exchange with local residents makes behavior of student change a little bit daily.
In conclusion, both the benefits of learning in other country and its possible risks have the same degree of importance
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the students') or simply say ''most students''.
Suggestion: most of the students; most students
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Message: After 'most of', you should use 'the' ('most of the universities') or simply say ''most universities''.
Suggestion: most of the universities; most universities
...versea. According many recent surveys, most of universities have a high fee about 20.000-40.000 USD...
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Message: Reduce redundancy by using 'little' or 'bit'.
Suggestion: little; bit
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, if, so, therefore, while, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1544.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32413793103 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92933825158 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.624137931034 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 462.6 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.3814785939 49.4020404114 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.933333333 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3333333333 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.46666666667 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0304582567207 0.244688304435 12% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00872682629297 0.084324248473 10% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0180033762774 0.0667982634062 27% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0221575256799 0.151304729494 15% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0207080793681 0.056905535591 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.58 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.1 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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