It is more important to invest in further education rather than to gain work
experience after finishing university in order to find a good job.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge
or experience.
As the numbers of university graduates continues to increase, it can seem that there is no
alternative but to continue one’s studies in order to be more attractive in the job market,
rather than to seek to gain practical work experience. To see how valid this argument is, we
have to look at both sides of the debate.
First of all, let’s take a look at the first traditional route for university graduates. The main
reason why people undertake an undergraduate degree is to give them a competitive edge
in the job market, as gaining a degree is seen a guarantee of a certain level of mental ability.
It is then seen as necessary to combine this intellectual training with practical, real world
work experience in order to become a viable and strong contender in the job market.
The alternative view however argues that it is no longer enough merely to possess a
standard university degree and practical work experience. The sheer numbers of
graduates entering the labour market each year means that it is vital to gain an additional
competitive edge when applying for the more sought after positions with selective
employers.
So where does the truth lie? On the one hand there is the time honored view that has long
been the conventional and practical route to career success for young ambitious
individuals. On the other hand, the view that the job market has never been more
competitive and it is essential to aspire to much higher levels of competitive excellence.
With current lack of jobs available in the labour market it seems inevitable that one has to
gain additional qualifications which will prove to a potential employer that one is the right
candidate for that very job.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, look, so, then, as to, in addition, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1450.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82641691551 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.551724137931 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.0868493282 49.4020404114 126% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.818181818 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.3636363636 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.36363636364 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 20.0 4.38176352705 456% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133663568726 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0464461113195 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0353635183807 0.0667982634062 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0393910214739 0.151304729494 26% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0303911668033 0.056905535591 53% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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