Most high-level positions in companies are filled by men even though the workforce in many developed countries is more than 50 percent female. Companies should be required to allocate a certain percentage of these positions to women. Do you agree?
These days, many countries are providing ample opportunities to women in order to encourage them to come forward and help in the economic development. Companies should plan to assign a portion of senior level positions for the women. I completely agree with this statement and this essay will support my view with examples.
Firstly, women have the essential characteristics which are required by these senior positions in the organizations. They can easily take more workload, stress as mandated for such posts, therefore, are equally capable of doing a good job as men. In addition, they are also superior in taking responsibility. For example, in many countries women are designated at higher levels in government sectors such as finance minister, foreign minister, where they are honestly and dedicatedly working. However, some people believe that top level posts require more aggression, strategy and managerial skills which can be found in men only.
Another point to consider is that women are outperforming men in many university courses. Nowadays, they are getting higher grades in most professional fields which were previously dominated by men. For instance, in higher education such as law and medicine, more females are coming out as toppers as compared to male students. Therefore, they should be rewarded with top roles at workplace. Despite this, employers should bear in mind that such roles should be handed out on merit, not gender alone.
In my opinion, women possess many characteristics in terms of responsibility, stress management, academic performance and these make them equally qualified for higher level jobs, therefore, definite amount of such roles should be reserved in order to give women equal opportunities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, honestly, however, if, so, therefore, as to, for example, for instance, in addition, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1481.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44485294118 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95860415732 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.599264705882 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 472.5 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.6432306243 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.785714286 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4285714286 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.21428571429 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243052183668 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.082567397913 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0576992670273 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145313540359 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0332255968053 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.57 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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