In today's society, success is often measured in terms of wealth and possessions. Do you think these are the best measures of success? What makes a successful person?
Nowadays, it has become a general perception that only money and materialized standards can define an individual's level of achievement. Although, wealth can be assumed as one of the achievement factors but this isn't ultimate criteria to judge one's path of progress and to lead a happy life.
There are number of wealthy people around us. But do we consider all of them successful? Answer is simply no! It is because path to positive attainment of objectives includes person's character and overall attitude towards life and people around them. One's success should also be measured against moral and mental qualities one must possess to become an distinctive individual.
In addition, there is a slight differentiating line between path to our dreams and becoming selfish. One should define this line in early stages of their struggle in order to declare themselves as victorious. There are number of people who contributes in improving health conditions, education system and environmental scenario of the society. For instance, we must not forgot the Abdul Sattar Edhi's participation in helping needy people of his country. It is his key role and determination which lead to the foundation of world's largest ambulance service in Pakistan and much more. Even after his death, his legacy is functioning in prosperous way.
To summarise, abundance of valuable possessions can buy you countless desirable things in this world but solely cannot put you as an inspirational person in front of the world. Money can be an outcome of you successful career growth journey but true essence of success is hidden behind the attributes which defined your character.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1395.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24436090226 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92155577672 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.646616541353 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.3687720287 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.6428571429 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.14285714286 7.06120827912 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141595554723 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0441496780896 0.084324248473 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.064437303463 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0834657558337 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0703470294972 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.11 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.68 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.