The bar charts below show the marriage and divorce statistics for eight countries in 1981 and 1994.
The given bar chart reveals the information about the marriage and divorce statistics for nine countries in 1981 and 1994. It is a clearly and coherently representated.
With regard to marriages, USA was the country with the greater figure both in 1981 (about 10.5 per thousand people ) and 1994, (9 per thousands). The other countries , shown similar figures at around 5.6 marriages per thousands.
They all experienced of all from 1981 to 1994 except for denmark , which went up from 5 to just under 7.
Also divorce statistics was dominated by USA , where separations decreased slightly from about 5.3 to just over 4.5. Apart from germany and denmark , which figures remained unchanged and a little lower respectively, the other countries faced on upward trend over the period in question. Intrestingly, italy both in 1981 and 1994 was the only country with a number of divorces near to zero.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so, apart from, except for, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 5.60731707317 36% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 33.7804878049 89% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 746.0 965.302439024 77% => OK
No of words: 148.0 196.424390244 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04054054054 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.48791127476 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75562884016 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 106.607317073 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.635135135135 0.547539520022 116% => OK
syllable_count: 211.5 283.868780488 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.1115823397 43.030603864 165% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.571428571 112.824112599 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1428571429 22.9334400587 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.85714285714 5.23603664747 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.325403251364 0.215688989381 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.159822525128 0.103423049105 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.162268388527 0.0843802449381 192% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.216279961681 0.15604864568 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.146413604091 0.0819641961636 179% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 11.4140731707 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.