Although more and more people read the news online, some people still use newspaper. Why do you think this is? Which one do you prefer?
There are two main ways to read the world news, the online news and media news, these days. Although following the news via newspapers is not really common in today life, some people are willing to read newspapers. It appears that reading the news online is most convenient and safe. I will explain why in this essay.
Firstly, the news online is more accessible. This is because thanks to technological improvements such as the Internet, smartphones, laptops, tablets, and computer systems, individuals have easy access to the latest news via their personal devices. In other words, people do not need to leave their homes or workplaces to buy a newspaper. They just need to get connected to the Internet and read the news everywhere. In addition, a second and perhaps most significant benefit of reading the online news instead of newspapers is to save the forests. For instance, the types of paper are made of trees which are cut by paper manufacturers. Therefore, the ground will be a place without forests over time. As a solution, the rate of using papers should be gone down. An alternative such as the use of the Internet to read the news will be extremely useful. As a result, the world would be a place in which nature will be saved and the paper product will be minimized.
It is true that some people such as the seniors are not able to use the Internet and computers as well as youngsters. Thus, they should read the news via newspapers. Despite this, learning how to use the Internet for doing daily affairs is so significant for everyone. If they tried to learn the use of the Internet, they would have an easier life.
To conclude, the use of the Internet for activities such as reading the news is really reasonable in terms of providing comfort and the nature saving. It seems to me that individuals should gain the necessary skills to use the Internet in order to have a healthier and easier life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, really, second, so, therefore, thus, well, for instance, in addition, such as, as a result, as well as, in other words, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1590.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 4.70414201183 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6139986689 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.485207100592 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 495.9 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 9.0 2.52805611222 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.4183967203 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.5 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236308460722 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0762839175433 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.048194216583 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145545531492 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.048272757402 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.0946893788 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.68 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.47 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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