Light corporal punishment is being reintroduced in school of UK :what are the advantages and disadvantages of it? discus?

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Light corporal punishment is being reintroduced in school of UK :what are the advantages and disadvantages of it? discus?

Light corporal is a physical punishment which teachers apply on children. It is also developing in schools. Today topic asserts that should light punishment being reintroduced in schools : benificial or not? I shall explore my point of view from both sides in below paragraph.

To begin with, group of people who believe that it should be introduced in schools. The main reason for believing that it helps to maintain discipline. Pupils are being changed their behavior by applying punishment of light. Moreover, students achievements are improve in curricular and co curricular activities. The suitable example would be survey conducted by national school Delhi, at least 80% children got highest marks in their examination who was failed before.

Secondly, people who believe that it should never be introduced in schools because student also face a frustration and neither do work comfortably nor explain our self. Secondly, it breeds a disrespect in the minds of pupils.According to current news of jag bani, pupils are doing misbehave with teachers that's why, 56%students restricted from schools.

Overall, there is no any single answer of this question, punishment should be introduced in schools, also crucial for a increase level of achievements.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, at least, to begin with

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1067.0 1615.20841683 66% => OK
No of words: 196.0 315.596192385 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44387755102 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74165738677 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97632528477 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.683673469388 0.561755894193 122% => OK
syllable_count: 309.6 506.74238477 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.1600476603 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.9166666667 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3333333333 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.41666666667 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205578748452 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0807690937283 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0975152321626 0.0667982634062 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128880408921 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0837586721321 0.056905535591 147% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.98 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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