You are invited to an old classmate’s party organized by an old friend. In your letter, you should
address:
- If you will be participating in it
- Tell something about your life
- Ask some information about other friends who will possibly join
Dear Ryan,
Thank you for inviting me to an old classmate's party in your home and hope you are doing good. I am excited to come and meet old school friends there since I have not met any of them recently.
I have a little daughter now, who is two years old and my parents take care of her because my wife Rashmi also works at a private company. But she might resign from her job next month to take care of our little one. I am currently working as a system engineer at MIT. Recently I have got a new promotion and will be travelling to Kandy later this year.
Hope all the classmates will come for the party this time even though it’s in a weekday evening. How is Mala and Bala doing hence they are your best friend for a longtime now. I did not meet them after our graduation. Is Roshan and Gamika still working at your company or move to another. Let’s have a chit chat once I am there with more details.
I thank you again for this wonderful invitation and looking forward to spending a pleasant evening at your place.
Best wishes,
Thulasya
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 10, column 13, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t evening at your place. Best wishes, Thulasya
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, if, look, so, still
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 873.0 937.175257732 93% => OK
No of words: 200.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.365 4.54256449028 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.2488886144 2.54303337028 88% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 127.690721649 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.645 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 274.5 290.88556701 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.2934367098 44.8134815571 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.1538461538 76.5299724578 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3846153846 16.8248392259 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.84615384615 4.34317383033 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236085958701 0.216113520407 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0693589309181 0.0766984524023 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0830862488606 0.0603063233224 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153511426372 0.12726935374 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0954989501322 0.0580467560999 165% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.8 8.37731958763 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.47 8.71597938144 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.99 7.59969072165 92% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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