Some people think that spend a lot of money on birthday and marriages is a waste of money but other think that it is improtant to young prople and the society discuss both sides and give your opinion

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Some people think that spend a lot of money on birthday and marriages is a waste of money but other think that it is improtant to young prople and the society discuss both sides and give your opinion

Celebration add charm to the the beauty of life presently, hefty some of money on birthday and marriages are totally wastage of money other folk assert that it is important to young peoples and the society here this essay eleborate both sides with my own preception

There are manifold points to endorse former view first and foremost peoples who belong to poor family to illustrate, they cannot efford these type of occasion such as marriages burthdays and so on they work arround the clock for earn bread and butter thus they are destitute folks cannot be able to arrange birthdays and marriages moreover, it is hard nut to crack to content everyone for example, if peoples organised marriages and birthdays it is hard to fulfil their relatives wishes because some peoples also make excuse related to food

On the contrary, there are conflict sides peoples who are rich or bussiness men arrange expensive marriages to demostrate, richers invited celebrities on marriages and also decorate the palace and house with quality flowers which add charm to celebration beside it gurdians are passinate to bestow marvellous gift such as car,bike,jewelleries and also showoff among peoples

To recapitulate, in my opinion peoples should spend less money on occasion and also help destutute folk who cannot able to work at the last cut your clothes according to your suit

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, so, thus, well, for example, such as, in my opinion, on the contrary

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1148.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 225.0 315.596192385 71% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10222222222 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70182014553 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 176.041082164 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.604444444444 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 368.1 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 1.0 16.0721442886 6% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 225.0 20.2975951904 1109% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 0.0 49.4020404114 0% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 1148.0 106.682146367 1076% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 225.0 20.7667163134 1083% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 100.0 7.06120827912 1416% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251267688217 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.251267688217 0.084324248473 298% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0667982634062 0% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156122011864 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.081769770416 0.056905535591 144% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 115.1 13.0946893788 879% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -156.9 50.2224549098 -312% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 91.0 11.3001002004 805% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 13.78 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 18.59 8.58950901804 216% => Dale chall readability score is high.
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 53.0 9.78957915832 541% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 92.0 10.1190380762 909% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 92.0 10.7795591182 853% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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