Some people believe that visitors to other countries should follow local customs and behaviour. Others disagree and think that the host country should welcome cultural differences.
Nowadays the content of tourism has been expended extremely in order such countries have a great income from this industry. There are different opinions about behavior of gusts and hosts. Some talents of affair believe that tourist should commit to local culture and some other say it had better that touristic countries make more comfortable condition for their gusts. Although both of this outlook could be corrected, second attitude probably is more comprehensive.
Any country has an individual culture and everybody who is travelling to should approve this culture. In addition some rules is the same in all he word such as forbidden of murder, stealing, and drunk driving and so other. Among this condition convictions of people and society is so important and all tourists should attend to them. But some other domestic law which may affect on comfort ability of gust must be ignored why this situation may has a negative influence on people to select an area as destination. If a society want to have enormous tourist it will accept some condition why today tourist pay a large amount of money to have a peaceful time without any hard limitation.
So that for expending of tourist industry it is vital to make a cooperation between the host and the gust. In addition for improving the tourism nations should ignore the hardening of society culture and also impress other country of their life standard and comfortably. This conditions could encourage any person to pass their vacation in easier area. This fact cause coming a large amount of money and financial growth which could be improved the level of living and many other parameters in that country.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 106, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: addition,
...ling to should approve this culture. In addition some rules is the same in all he word s...
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Line 2, column 148, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'words'.
Suggestion: words
...dition some rules is the same in all he word such as forbidden of murder, stealing, ...
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Line 2, column 373, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
.... But some other domestic law which may affect on comfort ability of gust must be ignored...
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Line 3, column 110, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: addition,
...ation between the host and the gust. In addition for improving the tourism nations shoul...
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Line 3, column 509, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... many other parameters in that country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, may, second, so, as for, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1390.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57678519776 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.586330935252 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 441.9 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.3792335474 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.923076923 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3846153846 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.07692307692 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.238753587431 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0814336096637 0.084324248473 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0826120541836 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171700695974 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.02406710423 0.056905535591 42% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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